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PageOne first try...

PostPosted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 8:13 pm
by a58132670
Here it is.

Re: PageOne first try...

PostPosted: Sat May 02, 2009 1:57 pm
by hiddenryuu
Here's the pencil sketch for the first 2 frames...

booko4rev1.jpg

Re: PageOne first try...

PostPosted: Thu May 07, 2009 6:41 pm
by invadererik
So i've been wanting to post a comment for a while but havent found the time to do it... and
here goes the quick version of the attempt :

1) I think basically the reason lyla could open the door was because of the necromancy link
back in the original storyline... ie layla is good at a certain type of magic probably
because shes a half-breed... same as Ki I would guess.
Furthering this thought , each race has a certain type of magic more defined,
and by mixing these you get closer to the sorta spirit magic / time / life / death
which is what the bo4 is a mixture of the 4 magics that creates and holds togheter
the life of the world of Bo4. so both ki and lyla have magics that are more associated
with the bo4... I guess if you want the numbers to hold up you need 4 mixes of
the races to be able to open up the book of 4.... or maybe you need to mix
the magics / ie no need to breed mixes... also interestingly enough, Ki could
have been the "chosen" one to open as much as lyla possibly, but totally
different circumstances.

2) I guess the door should signify this whole idea more, so maybe the door should be
made of bones or something like that, so that only a necromancer or somebody who
can bring flesh back to the dead, or something like that could actually open the door.

3) now if we want it to be sorta funny or messup as lyla tends to do, one idea
that could happen would be to turn the bones hostile instead .... dunno where
that will go but whatever.

4) we probably need to figure out what else is inside before going on...

5) it was a bit of a fail start... back to the drawing board.

Re: PageOne first try...

PostPosted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 7:34 pm
by hiddenryuu
What do you think about this?

bo4i.jpg

Re: PageOne first try...

PostPosted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 7:58 pm
by hiddenryuu
Here some more...feel free to speak up all :)

bo4ii.jpg


Not sure how to word the first frame basically a "You got to be kidding me" type text

Re: PageOne first try...

PostPosted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 2:56 pm
by hiddenryuu
more

bo4iii.jpg

Re: PageOne first try...

PostPosted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 10:02 am
by hiddenryuu
bo4iv.jpg


More

Re: PageOne first try...

PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 12:13 pm
by hiddenryuu
One more page!

bofv.jpg

Re: PageOne first try...

PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 2:55 pm
by hiddenryuu
bofvi.jpg

Re: PageOne first try...

PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 4:41 pm
by hiddenryuu
revision for the last 2 frames see if it works better.

bo4ivb.jpg